Feedback and Revisions

Cover:
When presenting my magazine to a group, it was suggested to me that I rearrange the subheadings. On the final draft, they were covering up the model, distracting the viewers from the cover image. On my own, I decided that I want to experiment with the title. I've been testing different colors, fonts, and styles. I am not sure if I want to replace it yet, but I think experimenting to see what could come out of it won't hurt. 


Table of Contents:
When reviewing my magazine, I decided to take out three images from the table of contents and replace two of them. The original set up looked crowded with six images. I think with three it allows the viewer to focus on the words, creating a minimalist style. For the Sarasota Photographer image, I changed it to an image of an actual photographer from Sarasota. The image I used to replace the This Month's Technique image is from the same photo shoot that use for the article pages. This gives the reader a sneak peek into what the other images look like for that article. It was also suggested to me that I experiment with ways to make the page numbers images easier to read that are on the images. Some of them became hard to read on the original draft. One thing I forgot to add was a footer for this page that has the magazine name and volume date.

Article Pages:

For this page, it was suggested to me that I chose some more diverse images for the two article pages. For the final draft, all the images were very similar with the blue background. So, I have changed the images to other ones from the same photo shoot. Also, I have to finish writing the article for the first page.